Slight modification to my main navigation to reference more of the perforation from boarding passes.
Brought the ornate line graphics from the homepage into the other pages.
Repositioned the term navigation and switched the hierarchy between them and "Destination."
Also shortened the column width of the body text and positioned the article buttons within the same width.
1 comment:
1. I think that there is enough visual hierarchy and clues that help you understand what is clickable and what is not.
2. I think that it is very clear where the main and sub navigation resides within the content. I like the fact that you altered your main navigation so that is would be more compatible with the way a site is constructed in dreamweaver. I also like the serindipidous qualities of the sub navigation.
3. I think that you did a good job of connecting similar content through hyperlinks and other forms of navigation.
4. I think the sub nav text on the main page is a little small and maybe even the body text to, though that seems to be more legible. The line length and space around the content seems good though.
5. I think that you did a very good job at making everything clear altough I wonder if the people will understand the “tion” reference.
6. The grid system is carried throughout the content pages and I think there is a nice variation between the pages that breaks up the grid and adds interest to the composition of the page. The article pages are a breath of fresh air.
7. I think that this compostion would work at optimal screen size but I wonder what happens when the window is condensed. Maybe look more into how that will look.
8. I think that path that you carve through the website is effective and there is a nice variation through the pages so the your interest does not fade.
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